Comments on: Chapter 16: Really... Shut Up, Squishy http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/ A fantasy webnovel by Alex McGaughan Thu, 06 May 2010 21:58:40 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Alex McG http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-6660 Alex McG Fri, 20 Nov 2009 22:24:40 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-6660 You're experiencing dragon-god visions and dragonblood racism? You're experiencing dragon-god visions and dragonblood racism?

]]> By: kneejo http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-6628 kneejo Tue, 10 Nov 2009 16:35:39 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-6628 It was just fiction? I'm disappointed! I am experiencing this shit for real, and thought I found a page with some helpful advise.. bummer.. It was just fiction? I'm disappointed! I am experiencing this shit for real, and thought I found a page with some helpful advise.. bummer..

]]> By: Mordakun http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-1740 Mordakun Thu, 15 Jan 2009 22:07:28 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-1740 Nice showing a bit of his raw magic talent in there. :) Nice showing a bit of his raw magic talent in there. :)

]]> By: Alex McG http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-1168 Alex McG Sun, 16 Nov 2008 20:53:25 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-1168 Thanks! Glad you like it. If you want to start from the beginning, there's a "start here" button at the top of the page. Hope you enjoy the rest! Thanks! Glad you like it.
If you want to start from the beginning, there's a "start here" button at the top of the page. Hope you enjoy the rest!

]]> By: ~willow~ http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-1164 ~willow~ Sun, 16 Nov 2008 19:25:52 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-1164 hi! this is the first of any of your chapters that I've read. I enjoyed the whole concept of telepaths getting degrees, with undergrad majors in cognitive art - very nice touch :) hi! this is the first of any of your chapters that I've read. I enjoyed the whole concept of telepaths getting degrees, with undergrad majors in cognitive art - very nice touch :)

]]> By: Pan http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-976 Pan Tue, 04 Nov 2008 17:02:58 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-976 No problem =) Fiction editor is pretty much my dream job, so consider it practice XD No problem =) Fiction editor is pretty much my dream job, so consider it practice XD

]]> By: Alex McG http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-944 Alex McG Mon, 03 Nov 2008 23:01:07 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-944 Yeah, I like to respond though. If nothing else, it lets you guys know I'm listening to what you're saying and appreciate it. By the way Pan, thanks for all the feedback you consistently give--I really do appreciate it. Yeah, I like to respond though. If nothing else, it lets you guys know I'm listening to what you're saying and appreciate it. By the way Pan, thanks for all the feedback you consistently give--I really do appreciate it.

]]> By: Pan http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-942 Pan Mon, 03 Nov 2008 20:31:18 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-942 Heh, better safe than sorry. I honestly don't write my comments expecting you to respond to my specific points--mostly just for you to have feedback; I figure it's good for you to know what readers are thinking so you can properly do foreshadowing or misdirection or whatever--so don't worry. =) Heh, better safe than sorry. I honestly don't write my comments expecting you to respond to my specific points--mostly just for you to have feedback; I figure it's good for you to know what readers are thinking so you can properly do foreshadowing or misdirection or whatever--so don't worry. =)

]]> By: Alex McG http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-939 Alex McG Mon, 03 Nov 2008 14:51:50 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-939 Glad you all are liking it. @Pan and others: Man, sometimes it gets tough not to give stuff away when responding to comments. So, I shall say nothing :) Glad you all are liking it.
@Pan and others: Man, sometimes it gets tough not to give stuff away when responding to comments. So, I shall say nothing :)

]]> By: Cameron http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-934 Cameron Mon, 03 Nov 2008 06:46:43 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-934 Nice chapter, it shows how things can really get under someones skin(and or scales[both in shawns case]) i know sparing is a good way to relieve stress, but sometimes, it's better to not subject others to yourself, Nice chapter,
it shows how things can really get under someones skin(and or scales[both in shawns case])
i know sparing is a good way to relieve stress, but sometimes, it's better to not subject others to yourself,

]]> By: Whitney http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-927 Whitney Sun, 02 Nov 2008 21:07:34 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-927 very nice. i'm glad that i was justified in my loathing of chris (the one in the story! ;p) poor shawn, i bet he's going to get on hell of an "i told you so" from Retis. can't wait to see what happens next! very nice. i'm glad that i was justified in my loathing of chris (the one in the story! ;p)
poor shawn, i bet he's going to get on hell of an "i told you so" from Retis.
can't wait to see what happens next!

]]> By: Pan http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-916 Pan Sun, 02 Nov 2008 02:19:52 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-916 Good, I like the idea of a Telepath who's just...kind of a dick. XD Somehow telepaths always end up being either caring, sensitive people or archvilllains. You don't meet a lot who are just assholes. Nice chapter. But either I don't know Shawn very well, or something is...kinda up with him. I can understand being really bothered but something's up when he attacks and then blows off Retis like that....we shall see. ^_^ Good, I like the idea of a Telepath who's just...kind of a dick. XD Somehow telepaths always end up being either caring, sensitive people or archvilllains. You don't meet a lot who are just assholes.

Nice chapter. But either I don't know Shawn very well, or something is...kinda up with him. I can understand being really bothered but something's up when he attacks and then blows off Retis like that....we shall see. ^_^

]]> By: Alex McG http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-914 Alex McG Sun, 02 Nov 2008 01:41:51 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-914 Thanks. The ending just kind of presented itself, I didn't have much to do with it :) Thanks. The ending just kind of presented itself, I didn't have much to do with it :)

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-910 Chris Poirier Sat, 01 Nov 2008 18:04:39 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-910 Good pacing. Nice and tense at the end. Good pacing. Nice and tense at the end.

]]> By: Severianz http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/106/chapter-16-really-shut-up-squishy/comment-page-1/#comment-908 Severianz Sat, 01 Nov 2008 15:35:16 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=106#comment-908 Heh, Stupid "Life" always causing problems. Heh, Stupid "Life" always causing problems.

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