Comments on: Chapter 25: Ooh, a Project... http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/ A fantasy webnovel by Alex McGaughan Thu, 06 May 2010 21:58:40 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Alex McG http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-7731 Alex McG Mon, 26 Apr 2010 07:19:52 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-7731 i have not abandoned this story. i have not abandoned this story.

]]> By: Coatillion http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-7660 Coatillion Wed, 21 Apr 2010 15:02:14 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-7660 I guess he proved you wrong I guess he proved you wrong

]]> By: so much for that.. http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-7284 so much for that.. Mon, 22 Feb 2010 12:46:25 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-7284 A few guesses of my own to the future: No updates. He hasnt given any indication that the story even exists anymore, not even a twitter in 213 days. Did the author die or something. At the very least he could have said "I have abandonded this story.". A few guesses of my own to the future: No updates.

He hasnt given any indication that the story even exists anymore, not even a twitter in 213 days. Did the author die or something. At the very least he could have said "I have abandonded this story.".

]]> By: Stig Hemmer http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-7269 Stig Hemmer Sat, 20 Feb 2010 16:55:39 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-7269 I love your story so far! Great characters, interesting events. I found it interesting that Shawns father was nervous about "being put under scrutiny". There is more going on in Dragon society than meets the eye... A few guesses as to the future: Shawn will be studying Bridget. He will be stung. On purpose. Fallon is a Terrimutinem. I love your story so far! Great characters, interesting events.

I found it interesting that Shawns father was nervous about "being put under scrutiny". There is more going on in Dragon society than meets the eye...

A few guesses as to the future:
Shawn will be studying Bridget. He will be stung. On purpose.
Fallon is a Terrimutinem.

]]> By: Coatillion http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-7014 Coatillion Sun, 10 Jan 2010 10:24:50 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-7014 Agreed Agreed

]]> By: AusRambo http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-6694 AusRambo Wed, 02 Dec 2009 14:43:16 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-6694 Yeah I'd like to know that as well. Yeah I'd like to know that as well.

]]> By: Pan http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-6678 Pan Fri, 27 Nov 2009 07:04:27 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-6678 So...you're clearly, for one reason or another, on hiatus now. Temporary, "temporary" *winkwinknudgenudge*, or permanent? So...you're clearly, for one reason or another, on hiatus now. Temporary, "temporary" *winkwinknudgenudge*, or permanent?

]]> By: Ladyinahat http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-6544 Ladyinahat Fri, 30 Oct 2009 05:29:27 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-6544 Hi! I found this today from Clare Miller's story "Chatoyant College". I am so glad I followed the link! This is a great story and I am really excited to see where you go with it. I hope that your life allows you to get back toyour writing soon. You are very talented and it would be a great shame to allow such a wonderful story to langish and die incomplete. I will be checking back from time to time to see if you have updated. I am looking forward to them! Hi!

I found this today from Clare Miller's story "Chatoyant College".

I am so glad I followed the link! This is a great story and I am really excited to see where you go with it. I hope that your life allows you to get back toyour writing soon. You are very talented and it would be a great shame to allow such a wonderful story to langish and die incomplete.

I will be checking back from time to time to see if you have updated. I am looking forward to them!

]]> By: Alex McG http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-6312 Alex McG Fri, 14 Aug 2009 03:21:23 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-6312 Thanks! Hopefully it won't be a few months before there's more to read. I'm trying to get my schedule worked out now and start writing CotF again soon. Thanks!
Hopefully it won't be a few months before there's more to read. I'm trying to get my schedule worked out now and start writing CotF again soon.

]]> By: THF http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-6310 THF Thu, 13 Aug 2009 00:05:23 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-6310 Hey found you today on the fantasy section of the web fiction guide and read all your chapters today. I liked them. : ) I'll check in again in a few months or so I guess. I like to read a bunch of chapters at once because the story seems to flow better that way. Not really sure where you are going with your story but I have to say that I have enjoyed it so far. Just wanted to let you know. Hey found you today on the fantasy section of the web fiction guide and read all your chapters today. I liked them. : ) I'll check in again in a few months or so I guess. I like to read a bunch of chapters at once because the story seems to flow better that way. Not really sure where you are going with your story but I have to say that I have enjoyed it so far. Just wanted to let you know.

]]> By: Amy http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-6300 Amy Tue, 04 Aug 2009 15:38:10 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-6300 I love this story, I found it on Web Fiction Guide and I'll be putting it on my currently reading list, as well as giving a review. ;-) I understand that life interupts our hobbies, doesn't mean I won't whine a little though, *giggles*. It is a great story and I love your writing style. I love the quirky, sarcastic, and "insensitive", sense of humor that Fallon and Shawn share, it reminds me a little of myself. By the way, just what manner of creature is Fallon? I don't remember reading anything more in depth than a physical description. I wish I had more money, I would just hire you to write for us all, lol. I can't wait to see what comes next, I think he is going to choose the Pirouette for his project, although maybe not after Roo's accident from the same theory in a different application. Hmmmm, veddy intevesting. I love this story, I found it on Web Fiction Guide and I'll be putting it on my currently reading list, as well as giving a review. ;-)
I understand that life interupts our hobbies, doesn't mean I won't whine a little though, *giggles*. It is a great story and I love your writing style. I love the quirky, sarcastic, and "insensitive", sense of humor that Fallon and Shawn share, it reminds me a little of myself. By the way, just what manner of creature is Fallon? I don't remember reading anything more in depth than a physical description. I wish I had more money, I would just hire you to write for us all, lol. I can't wait to see what comes next, I think he is going to choose the Pirouette for his project, although maybe not after Roo's accident from the same theory in a different application. Hmmmm, veddy intevesting.

]]> By: Alex McG http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-6262 Alex McG Wed, 22 Jul 2009 21:43:32 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-6262 :) Thank <em>you</em>. I hope to be getting back to CotF soon. I'll put up a blog post at some point about why I haven't been getting things up lately. Thanks for your support. :) Thank you.

I hope to be getting back to CotF soon. I'll put up a blog post at some point about why I haven't been getting things up lately. Thanks for your support.

]]> By: One of the Twins http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-6261 One of the Twins Wed, 22 Jul 2009 08:31:26 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-6261 anything good is worth waiting for. CotF is worth waiting for. It is your gift to us as readers... thank you anything good is worth waiting for.
CotF is worth waiting for. It is your gift to us as readers...
thank you

]]> By: Alex McG http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-6251 Alex McG Wed, 08 Jul 2009 20:36:09 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-6251 Yes, it has been too long since the last update, but this is not my full-time job. It COSTS me money to put up CotF, whereas AE is supporting herself on Tales of MU. I have other things I have to deal with, and honestly, sometimes CotF has to take a back seat. I don't wish to speak ill of AE or Tales of MU, so I won't. I will just say that our styles of writing will always let her put out more words faster than I can. Finally, CotF is free and I put a lot of work into it, so please mind your manners. Yes, it has been too long since the last update, but this is not my full-time job. It COSTS me money to put up CotF, whereas AE is supporting herself on Tales of MU. I have other things I have to deal with, and honestly, sometimes CotF has to take a back seat.

I don't wish to speak ill of AE or Tales of MU, so I won't. I will just say that our styles of writing will always let her put out more words faster than I can.

Finally, CotF is free and I put a lot of work into it, so please mind your manners.

]]> By: Honestly? http://childrenofthefirst.com/main/196/chapter-25-ooh-a-project/comment-page-1/#comment-6250 Honestly? Wed, 08 Jul 2009 08:32:59 +0000 http://childrenofthefirst.com/?p=196#comment-6250 Not worth the wait, and another month for a chapter? Holy crap, look at Tales of MU for once. She's running, like 6 different stories! Not worth the wait, and another month for a chapter? Holy crap, look at Tales of MU for once. She's running, like 6 different stories!

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